WIN
I've already saved this to my HDD in the off chance it doesn't survive the portal.
Winnar R j00.
WIN
I've already saved this to my HDD in the off chance it doesn't survive the portal.
Winnar R j00.
Wow I'm honored, someone downloaded a cartoon I made. Honared R eye.
Awesome
BAHHAHAH, that was epic.
I'd have liked it better if I didn't understand German, and didn't understand most of what was being said. DO ONE IN FRENCH.
Knowing what's really being said kills the humor a bit. Still....awesome.
Doing one in French was actually what we planned to do next.
Great to hear ideas and feedback and get good scores though!
A masterwork.
It captures all the drama and trauma of my childhood, but with none of the buttsex.
Thankfully.
You can't go wrong with dr0nks and office space.
I've got to go find a copier to kick the shit out of....
NE, you are a king amoung men, never shave that chest of yours :D
Well scripted, paced and animated.
All around, a damn good flash. My only suggestion would be to keep the music running in the background once you cut into the scenes. As in, keep the intros at the volume you have them now, but cut it back to about 1/4 that while the locks are talking and whatnot. The music in the background will serve to fill in the gaps in the speech. Check out any major motion picture...there's just about always a bit of music going on. It's a good way to set the mood, and also keeps that jarring abrupt stop of the music from disrupting the flow of the story.
That's a damn minor flaw in an otherwise well engineered flash. I'm actually interested to see what happens next episode. And let me tell you, that's DAMN RARE for me with NG flashes. ESPECIALLY lock/clock/wtfever ones. Well played, I must say.
Wow, thanks for the great review. I love reviews like this, even if they aren't high scored, because I like to improve myself, and little tips, or even major tips will help me come to my potential. I'm really glad you enjoyed my movie, and I'm even more glad that you took the time to write out a review to help me make better flash. I will keep your tip about keeping the music going to help the mood along and fill in the conversation gaps, that is actually a really good idea and I will be sure to implement it in my next episode, and in future movies. Thanks again.
TEATS ARE FOR EATS
You do realize, this now needs a sequel of only bare-boob shots, to the sounds of the 1812 Overture....right?
>=D @ Em, Sam, Teq, Satanessa et. al.
Thanks for submiting the first pic to that new flash, a couple weeks ago, ;), ...
THERE IS A KITTEN HEAD ON MY HEAD
An epic chronicle of the fall of rome.
Someone needs to tattoo this entire montage onto their back. Then and only then will the gods of b33r be appeased. I volunteer Em, as she's not of legal age to have an opinion on the matter.
MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R MORE B33R
Yes, EM must fullfill the prophecey! Thanks for the review Big sexy, have a wonderfully Manly day...thing :D
I dig your style and humor...
But FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, GET A NEW MICROPHONE.
Either that, or back up off the one you have...or get a pop-guard from a music shop or SOMETHING. Those pops are annoying as all hell, and really detract from an otherwise excellent flash.
Don't worry, I fixed it for my next animation
Meh. Your first flash was better.
This dragged a bit, the plot was....odd to say the least, and didn't make a whole lot of sense. If you're going to do stories with action and plot, you need to make the action more action-y and the plot easier to follow. That and speed everything up. It ended up getting boring.
cool an administrater reviewed my work thx for da tip im actuly tryin a different style l8ter
Heh...random friendly ninja ATTACK!
I like your style...squiggle-mation, sort of.
Your weird homebrew techno was also a plus.
Over all, not a bad animation at all. Keep it up.
thx dude lol that wat the type of review i was aiming at
Well done.
Nice use of sound, good twist, excellent easter egg.
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