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[Weightloss for dummies]

Well done

The part with the ventriloquist dragged though. I think it would be funnier and flow better if you just cut that whole section out and left it with the sex sounds. If not, just really shorten it up with Mr. Puppet man.

MakefunNotwar718 responds:

I agree, but i needed to make a "success story" since all infomercials have one. Good that you lasted that long. Thanks for the review.

[Mini Fantasy]

Soooo slow

Next time

make the

speech bubbles

big enough

to fit

more than

two words

at a

time.

Annoying ain't it?

flasheagle responds:

I know this on is not so great because i just use 20 min

[TwelveOhSix2003]

Not bad...

my only suggestion is to add a square with the alpha set to zero to the buttons you use to pick the different sections. That way you don't have to try and click on a section of the actual word...which was damn hard in the pen0r one since the words kept flipping.

numbers responds:

Lowell@My un-humoristic attempt to make the movie challenging.

Thanks for the review!
<3

[Teenagers & Robots]

Not bad.

But if you're going to submit a movie that's not the full 400x550 pixels, then put in the correct size when you submit it. that way there won't be odd stuff running off the bottom of the screen like you had in a couple of scenes. Good use of music, but you could have left the words on the screen a bit longer....almost too fast to read, and I'm a fast reader.

Mightydein responds:

Thank you, but the correct size would be too small to see.

[Thug Life: Prelude]

Not bad at all for your first time

Drawing was really pretty good...no animation to speak of, but the way you did it it wasn't too obvious. I think you're off to a good start. My only suggestion would be to make it so it doesn't loop automatically. That annoys me...put a button at the end so I can see it again if I want to.

GHOSTDOG867 responds:

Thank you very much first of all for writing a good review (it only has 5 out of like 240 veiw im guessing)and the reason i didnt want to make the animation complicated on this one is becuase infact i was going for the suspence aspect, hence when migel jhonston got shot it just flashed to his dead bleeding corpes. and yea ill fix that loop problem. but the really stupid thing is i cant do shit worth button wise. hahaha ill take the tutorial for it again. peace.

[SD: Counter Terrorism]

Not for 56k-ers

Well....I think the most critical reviews you're going to get are going to be about the War and Peace load time, and the fact you used sticks.

My gripes are:
1) The plane noise is freakin loud, and it doesn't loop so much as start and stop over and over.
2) The talking clips are very very very repetitive.
3) It needs some music when nothing else is going on...otherwise it gets really slow.

My likes are:
1) When you had music going, it flowed pretty well.
2) The matrix stuff was put together decently.
3) The sniper's scope totally full of enemies was damn funny...even if it did slow down the move a lot....my suggestion, instead of using a ton of instances for a huge group scene like that, just use a static image.

Not bad...especially for a first time piece.

Andy-Parker responds:

Well, if you have a time machine, go back 2 years and tell me that when i made this. until you do that its gonna stay as 93 Scenes of frame by frame animation.

[Mystic SpaceShip Part 6]

Wow...that was poor

You call that a part 6? Next to nothing happened. The music was sampled at some horrible bit rate and sounded like it was playing from inside a cardboard box located down a long metal hallway. Take a tip from daily comic strips. Next time you write a soryline at least have something get resolved in each part, otherwise people aren't going to watch them.

LeninsTomb responds:

FUCKING BITCH! B WILL NOT STAND FOR YOUR IGNORANCE!

[Do You Yahoo!?-retake]

do you Yahoo!?

hehehe...i love it when a portal entry makes me laugh out loud. the feel of the Yahoo! comercial was perfect, as were the sound effects. add that to the fact that the HK MP5-K is my favorite sub-machine gun (am i crazy for having a favorite sub machine gun?) and you got yourself a good movie. my one criticism, your characters look just like every other character in these portal movies...find a style and run with it. overall....kickass!

Chuck responds:

wait...are you saying my drawing sucks? j/k. I see what you mean, though. It's pretty cool getting a good review from the same guy that did peas. I'll make sure to review yours.