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[The eternal battle]

HAH. Best loop ever.

Damn....I just gave away the whole plot!

D=

gio-m responds:

I am glad that you liked it. thanks

[Mecha-King Menorah]

Evangelion much?

I kid, I kid. ...though that Xmas tree looks a bit angel-ish, and the whole "OMG HALF THE MENORAH'S FACE GOT BLOWN OFF AS HE WAS BLASTED ACROSS THE CITY AND THEN HE FREAKED OUT" seems a bit familiar....

Meh. I've just got a photographic memory for kickass battle scenes.

Anyway, excellent style and execution. I love the transition from "crappy stick flash with MS Paint edited menorah" to "this kicks my ass sideways." Well played.

I look forward to future work...keep up the originality and singular style.

spacejelly responds:

Its total evangelion! lol i thought more people would notice! its more of an homage than a rip off, well thats what i tell myself at night.

[Snack Clocks]

SNACKOBOTS TRANSFORM AND ROLL OUT

The alternate costumes / naming kicked ass. Not to mention the theme song.

P TO THE G MOTHAFUCKAAAA

And everyone knows snacks > fruit any day.

[Mostly Metal Jacket]

EXTENDO PUNCH!

Awesome. If this doesn't make it onto the portal, I'mma kill some bunnies.

>=(

MAURY MAURY!!

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[Beardance]

I'd think it good were it not a blatant copy.

That exact same dance is done by that exact same bear on a Flash on the infamous Dickcream site. You just rotoscoped it.

I wish I'd seen this while it was under judgment, as then I could have flagged it.

Halfway decent concept....but do your own art.

Sabu responds:

Thanks for the consideration; yes, it is a trace put into a different context. Everyone should be well aware of this, I even posted the original for reference. I'm going to take the suggestions from below and split it up and make it interactive, etc, but I do not claim ownership over the shape of movement of the character.

Dickcream.. no, I've never been there. I'll check it out.

[South of Ground]

Very good for a first movie.

Definite room for improvement, but an excellent start nonetheless. Your characters were original and well conceptualized. Good facial expressions, good backgrounds, great plot funny and twisted humor. Excellent voice acting.

Now for the weak parts.
You need a better mic. The breathing and breath pops detracted from the great voice acting.
The subtitles. They really weren't needed. In most places they just looked tacked on, in others they were very difficult to read or misspelled. Your voice acting was very good, and as such I had no problem understanding what was being said or what was going on.
While what animation you had was good, there was little of it. Great faces, but there needs to be more character animation in the future.
Lack of music. While your voice acting was great, there were holes in the audio that just felt kind of blank. Even some low music in the background would make the flash as a whole more well-rounded. Sound effects help too. They give the flash the feel of an actual show or narrative as opposed to a bunch of talking and pictures.

Keep it up, I look forward to seeing more work from you. You have great promise.

[Armless Boy]

Well executed minimalist style. Very unique.

I must say I like both the idea and the execution of this flash. I like the just desserts the girl gets after her smug "watch" when clearly the armless boy can't do what she's showing him. The one thing that bothers me is the way the main character's eyes change style in the last scene. I look forward to your future submissions.