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[Weightloss for dummies]

Well done

The part with the ventriloquist dragged though. I think it would be funnier and flow better if you just cut that whole section out and left it with the sex sounds. If not, just really shorten it up with Mr. Puppet man.

MakefunNotwar718 responds:

I agree, but i needed to make a "success story" since all infomercials have one. Good that you lasted that long. Thanks for the review.

[Mini Fantasy]

Soooo slow

Next time

make the

speech bubbles

big enough

to fit

more than

two words

at a

time.

Annoying ain't it?

flasheagle responds:

I know this on is not so great because i just use 20 min

[TwelveOhSix2003]

Not bad...

my only suggestion is to add a square with the alpha set to zero to the buttons you use to pick the different sections. That way you don't have to try and click on a section of the actual word...which was damn hard in the pen0r one since the words kept flipping.

numbers responds:

Lowell@My un-humoristic attempt to make the movie challenging.

Thanks for the review!
<3

[Infiltrate Part 1]

Very "Poninja"....

But also very well done...decent use of sound and bullet time, and I dug the psychic sword action. Keep it up.

[Great Yoshi Migration 2]

Eh.

OK, you hit on my pet peeve like so many others tonight. If you're submitting a move and it's smaller than 400x550, put the right size in the "size" boxes when you submit it. That way we won't see those yoshis when they're hanging out off screen.

[The Great Jason Chase 2]

Not bad...

But I was hoping for a better death scene at the end. Drawing red lines all over Cannabis Clock was kind of weak.

[Teenagers & Robots]

Not bad.

But if you're going to submit a movie that's not the full 400x550 pixels, then put in the correct size when you submit it. that way there won't be odd stuff running off the bottom of the screen like you had in a couple of scenes. Good use of music, but you could have left the words on the screen a bit longer....almost too fast to read, and I'm a fast reader.

Mightydein responds:

Thank you, but the correct size would be too small to see.

[Thug Life: Prelude]

Not bad at all for your first time

Drawing was really pretty good...no animation to speak of, but the way you did it it wasn't too obvious. I think you're off to a good start. My only suggestion would be to make it so it doesn't loop automatically. That annoys me...put a button at the end so I can see it again if I want to.

GHOSTDOG867 responds:

Thank you very much first of all for writing a good review (it only has 5 out of like 240 veiw im guessing)and the reason i didnt want to make the animation complicated on this one is becuase infact i was going for the suspence aspect, hence when migel jhonston got shot it just flashed to his dead bleeding corpes. and yea ill fix that loop problem. but the really stupid thing is i cant do shit worth button wise. hahaha ill take the tutorial for it again. peace.

[Fun in the Woods]

Ba-dum CHING!

Heh....very well animated, and the voices were excellent. Keep it up.

[Manford the Clam]

Well...that was certainly unexpected

Heh..didn't see THAT coming. I especially like how the font changed at the switch-over point....very well thought out. My only issue is that the music for the first part ended before the animation was done....of course that could just be because my video card sucks. Hopefully Christmas will remedy that.
In any event, cool concept well executed.